Friday, 30 June 2017

My 15 minute writing sample.

He clutched the abandoned padlock in his wounded hand, his hand gradually started to tremble. He was in grief. Little drops of salty water formed around the edges of his eye and slowly rained down his face. The tears formed a narrow bundle of water at the end of his feet, the water was lukewarm but then gradually went crisp cold as the night grew darker. The weeping stop as the night grew wild and his enclosure was no longer safe, but there was nowhere to go.
The zoo had long been abandoned. No had cared about the animals anymore only because they thought that they would free themselves. They were right. All the animals were gone, all of them apart from the one infant app all there deserted with no one to care. The night increased with breezes turning into cyclone and hurricanes. Rain turned into snow storms. There was nothing to help the abandoned private now. The ape screamed and howled for help hoping his hope away but he sadly knew that doing that would no help either.

He needed more that hope he needed a miracle. Miracle won't happen life though, well that is what Jerry thought because there had been now miracles in his life. The cyclone got worse same with the hurricane and snowstorm. The monkey's enclosure shock violently. Jerry flew through the air and whacked his head on the wires and then paste out as fast as lightning.  

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